BlackPlastic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-Razor_Blade-]

((VOTED5))

I liked this song. It was interesting the way you changed the song so much throughout the course of the track. Usually when people try to do what you did it ends up being chaotic and fealing like your listening to a bunch of completly different short tracks played side by side, but you were able to keep it flowing smoothly. The percussions were great and for the most part the synth went great in all of the parts. I can't imagine anyone dancing to this, that's for sure, but it was definantly a great song to listen to. Good job.

customstuff responds:

Thank you so much! I keep getting zero-bombed!

[:=>Carbon<=:]

((VOTED4))

It was a great song I think. The synth was really nice melodies were really nice and they flowed great with the drum beat. You also did a great job of mixing things up throughout the song and not just keeping it generally the same song for3 minutes. I just think a few minor changes should be made with the percussions. Mostly about them being to loud, it really overpowers the synth which should be the main focus in a song like this. Other then that there isn't really anything else to improve on. Good job.

Moltov responds:

Yep, i could have made this song alot better but i just didnt try hard enough. thanks for the constructive review
-Moltov

[Fury AND Flames]

((VOTED2))

This is one of those songs where it seamed like you tried a bit to hard to make something new and original. It wasn't bad, I thought it was fun to listen since you mixed things up a lot throughout the song but overall it just seamed very chaotic and cluttered. The sections of the song just didn't flow together at all, what it seamed like was that I was listening to a bunch of loops played side by side to eachother. Maybe you should try taking some of the best parts of this song and turning them into loops because they just do not fit together enough to make a good song.

FlamingLynx responds:

Thats cool. It's just that the last song I made was really gud and I wanted to try and recreated it

[Boredom-Song]

((VOTED3))

I wouldn't really call this "crap". I actually found it a pretty interesting song to listen to. The keys were really catchy I think, both of them flowed together wonderfully. The drum beat was pretty simple but still I thought it flowed great with the rest of the song. It just had this interesting unique feal to it. I think you should really take this song more seriously then you did and actually make something out of it because I thought it was a really unique and fun song.

Terminater880 responds:

thanks i will look into that :)

[The Unforgiving]

(VOTED5))

A very good song. I really liked the riff, it was quite catchy. The song flowed very nicely and didn't have to much boring repetition in it. I also really liked the drums in this song, they fitted in perfectly with the guitar, which is always something you hear in a lot of metal songs. I do agree with you on the fact that this song would definantly be better with some vocals. It just seams a bit empty without it at certain parts. Try contacting me when ever, if ever, you get some vocals for this because I'd love to hear it.

[Smoky Room]

((VOTED4))

I liked this song. It didn't have much body or variety but it has this calm, relaxing vibe to it. The beat was nice and flowed very smoothly and seamed great as a background for possibly a future song. I would suggest maybe adding some synth in there. The song is good but it just seams to be missing something. I think just a simple synth loop would fit perfectly with the beat. Without it though I still found it to be a very smooth hip hop track that I could definantly see as background music for a game.

[Midnight Cruising Top Down.]

((VOTED 3))

It was an alright loop. I there was a lot of potential in this song but you didn't keep it consistent at all. There seamed to only be two variations of the song throughout the loop. One of them was boring and acked anything other then clapping (which was to loud in contrast to the synth in my oppinion) and the other was kind of obnoixiouse and chaotic.

Also if you were aiming for this to be in a racing scene or something along those lines like you said in your comments you would probably want to up the tempo a bit because when you think of racing, you're probably going to think of speed. But only keep that suggestion in mind if you particularly wanted it to be in a racing game.

So the major changes I would suggest would be to make the synth in part 1 louder and try to keep things a bit more simple in part 2 because like I said, it was way to chaotic. Also I would suggest maybe lowering the volume on the claps because they shouldn't be standing out THAT much.

[DH loop]

((VOTED3))

Well it wasnt bad, I thought it was pretty entertaining for stand alone piano computer made piano playing. It did get a lot better at the end. I just wish the whole song had that same sort of pizazz and originality that the end part had. It did loop pretty well which is an upside to it but to make a good song out of this it should be a lot longer and not just be piano unless the piano is suberbly outstanding which this wasnt really good enought to do. Still I hope to hear your next song. Good job.