Score: 9

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submission: [ out there ]

date: May 28, 2008

You did a good job here. The song was very well thought out and fun to listen to. The synth was great and the percussions flowed with the song perfectly. I just really don't think you needed this to be 6:38 long. You could easily shave this song down to 2 minutes without taking out anything vital to the song.

I would really suggest doing that because it doesn't matter how good a song is, no one seriously wants to sit down for six and a half minutes and listen to a single song. Especially when it isn't necesary.

Score: 10

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submission: Look Beyond the Seas

date: May 28, 2008

You were right about it being calm. Like most ambient songs it had the slow peacfullness to it but you were able to pull that off better then many other songs as have heard from this genre. The guitar wasn't very technical or anything special but it didn't need to be. It did what it was supposed to do and did a very good job with it.

You should make more tracks similiar to this in the future because I thought it was a really nice song and I'd love to hear more like it. Anyways great song. Good job.

Score: 8

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submission: XpeRi

date: May 28, 2008

The song really wasn't that bad. There was a lot of diversity throughout the song, it didn't transition very well between parts but it was nothing that really affected the song majorly. The problem was for some reason the song was incredibly low quality. I have no idea why though because the file size was pretty large. I don't know what program you are using but try to find some way to get that quality better.

Score: 8

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submission: slexiP daeD

date: May 24, 2008

It was definantly original I'll give you that. In my oppinion originality is the most important part to a song in the audio portal but this was almost to weird for me. It had this mix of industrial and hip hop which I have never really heard before. The beat was great and all these background effects that you put in there were almost hypnotic. Weird, but I liked it.

There's always room for improving but I don't even know what to suggest with a song like this because I barely even know what genre this really is. Just keep testing new things until you find exactly what you want. I don't really care how weird or different this song was, the thing is I enjoyed listening to it and that is the most important part. Good job.

Score: 9

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submission: Manticore Compress

date: May 24, 2008

This was great. I have never heard something that sounded like this before, it was really cool. The fast paced synth and the drums were great and flowed very smoothly but what made this song awsome was that bass in the background. It don't know why but that small addition just made this song rock so hard.

We really need more original sounding things like this in the audio portal nowadays because this was very interesting to listen to. Know way am I going to pass up giving a 5 to this. Good job.

Score: 8

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submission: Yoda is dead

date: May 24, 2008

It was a good song at it's core but there were a few things that kept it from being it's full potential. My biggest problem with the track was the volume. The volume is definantly not working out the way you have it because the more rythematic synth is to loud compared to the melodic one. You would want the melody to have a much bigger priority then the rythem.

You will also want to do something with the ending because 20 seconds of blank nothingness is a real turnoff to the track. It's not what you would call a major problem but it really shouldn't be to hard to fix, kind of matters which program you're using though.

Still behind a few problems here and there, the melody sounded really cool. With just a few adjustments this could be a really great song. I know it has the potential, you just need to bring it out. Also I don't understand the title. Can you help me out on that one?

Score: 10

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submission: .:Eternity:.

date: May 24, 2008

This was a pretty epic song. There was so much depth and thought put into this song it's really incredible. The beat just sucked you in and I found to actually be quite catchy. You also did a great job of switching up the song throughout the course of the track so that it wouldn't get to repeitive which worked out really great.

I would not change a single thing in this song. This version is absolutely perfect. I definantly hope to see more from you because you definantly have a lot of potential.

Score: 9

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submission: Space Ambient - ephixa

date: May 24, 2008

Ambient isn't exactly the hardest type of music to make but still I though this was pretty good. The piano track mixed with the echoing synth in the background gave this kind of lost in space feal to the song which I'm guessing is what you were aiming for. I couldn't exactly see this being in a flash like most other ambient songs but it was still a pretty cool thing to listen to, good job.

Score: 9

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submission: WHY??

date: May 23, 2008

You came on a little slow with the weird ambient beggining but the song got so much better as it went on. The synth was cool and had some distorsion that kind of gave it that signiture "goth" feal. The drum beat was good but I personally found the claps to be a little loud compared to the synth, since the synth should be the most focus you probably don't want that.

This was very good so I don't recomend changing to much, just work on everythings volume until you find what really hits the spot. You may want to shorten the ambient begginning to because 0 bombers might vote from the first 10 seconds because it's not goth music, that's just a minor suggestion though. Anyways it was a really great song that you should be proud of, good job.

Score: 4

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submission: Dead Skin Gein

date: May 23, 2008

You know the guitar wasn't really that bad and was actually kind of interesting to listen to. The problem is it only lasted for 13 seconds. You should really try actually forming this into a song because like I said, it sounded pretty cool.

Use the talent you have to make a riff out of that part, tack on a downloaded drum beat and that's pretty much all you have to do to make an alright guitar song. I would really suggest that because I think you have potential.