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THE GOOD
LOLZORZ TEH PPOOPSYS. A very nice pun there. And I have to give you some props for actually using fbf for the poopsys instead of just tweening a bunch of stuff. I see the sun is getting smaller now.
THE BAD
I see no message again. Thats the second time in a row. I will right a compaint letter to your manager. lol. Also did you use gradients on uranus. Gradients are for the noobiest of all nooby noobs.
hmmmmmmmm
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THE GOOD
I liked seeing good old jupiter from a distance. It had much detail put into it. Also I liked the wittle saturn hats on the flowers. They wooked so cwuuuuuute. And black and grey. Some of my favorite colors.
THE BAD
Where was my message. You expect me to watch a messagless sunshine movie. I pity the fool. Also the flower squishing was unesesary. It was only funny once. Also why was mister sun raising his fist at me.
hey, there is a message at the top!
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THE GOOD
Wow. You do know a lot about space. You knew that jupiters size causes unaturally high gravity and that it has an abnormal amount of moons. Very clever. Also I liked how you squished the flowers to represent heavy gravity.
THE BAD
Well I never really found it what planet it was until I counted because all you called it was the gassy giant and for some reson it was grey when we all know that good old jupiter is orangish red.
Jupiter is made up of completely gas I believe...
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THE GOOD
A nice edition to the series. One of my favorites here. The ever so mysteriouse mars. I like how you put that satelite and that little tiny alien in there. And I liked seeing my little earth so tiny.
THE BAD
Well earth had this really big black outline around it and made it look weird. And again the letters were the same color as the sunshine rays which made it harder to read. Also I had to zoom to read the sattelite bwecause it was so small.
yeah it is kind of hard to read.
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THE GOOD
A nice edition to the series. That looked like my backyard. lol. All happy peaceful and full of grazing animals. Some good tweening used for the clouds fish and waves. Nice job.
THE BAD
Well there could have definantly been a lot more detail in the fish and pretty much everything else. And the wave lines didnt really look like waves. Also the sun made a huge leep in size since the last movie.
For this one I just used the original file, so that's the small sun.
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THE GOOD
Wow. The detail on the ground was very precise and madde it look a little more professional. Also clever how the sun is starting to get smaller on every episode. And nice smooth clud movements. I see you stayed awake in science class.
THE BAD
There could have been more detail on the cluds. Also the sun was very off shaped like a ruggid oval and it just didnt look good like that. And what are those flowers doing on venus.
The flowers like to dance.
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THE GOOD
A very nice and creative idea. I see you went to mercury one of my personal favorites. Clever how you made the sun really big to compare how close to the sun mercury is. That shows you actually put some thought into this.
THE BAD
The sun was a little bit to big and when you tryed to put him in the corner he would bounce right back out. Also the sun was off shaped and the flowers could have moved around and animated smoother. And since the sunshine rays were the same color as the sun it would disapear whenver the ray went by.
Well I didn't draw the flowers so ok.
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THE GOOD
I guess it was kind of funny. A fish talking. Thats my lifelong dream. A I see you did use some v cam so props for that. And even thouh it wasnt the best you did have voiceacting.
THE BAD
It was super incredibly short. And in that short amount of time it didnt even have good graphics or voice acting. And I dont like ending a movie on a bright white screen with the end drawn with the paint tool with no replay button.
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THE GOOD
It was pretty funny. I like snakes on a plane parodys. This one was better than a lot of the shit that has been submitted. And at least it did have some voice acting. And the incredibly bad french accent was kind of funny too.
THE BAD
I could here things in the background. It sounded liek the tv or your family or something. Also just abruptly there was no sound but the lips kept moveing. I dont know if that was just me or not.
Thanks for the cunstructive critism, I have huge trouble voice acting in the past whereas I dumped projects completely, so I'm happy with the voices here. And the sound in the back might be the ambience sound loop I got from flashkit, you know to make it seem like theres other peeps in the restaurant, and yes the lip syncing was off at quite a few points.
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THE GOOD
Well that car looked pretty good and there was some nicely done backgrounds. The music was very nice too. And bonus points for using the v cam semi properly.
THE BAD
This was very bad for the style you were going for. When the car hit something, instead of smashing you would just use the free transformer to make it smaller. And it definantly wasnt smooth. And when you moved the camera the fire would all of a sudden stop animating on one of the scenes. And none of the stunts were even that big. If I had some advice for you it would be to go to 30 fps instead of 12 like a noob at flash.
It was 24fps.
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