((VOTED 5))
Wow. This song was really good. A lot better than I expected. It may have been slow which Im not usually into but still with that in mind I thought this was amazing. That quiet little synth in the background is what really made me like this song. The beat was great to. It may have been pretty slow and simple but I still have to admit I loved it. I could imagine this being used in a submission if it gets noticed. No doubt. I would not change one thing in this song.
5/5
wow, thanks. i recently bought hoshi no koe by nobukazu takemura, and the electric piano in the second song was what inspired this song. because of this review, i'll probably work much harder to make the song finished better and quicker, so again, thanks!
((VOTED 5))
This definantly had to be one of the better made loops that I have heard on this site. The synth was amzing. Peacfull yet not boring or uninteresting. It had a really nice drum beat there to accompony it also. Had some great affects taht really added a lot to the song. I would just never thought I would hear so much stuff packed into such a short loops.
Really the only bad thing about this was that it did loop as good as may have hoped. You could clearly spot the end of the song. To bad though because it was almost perfect. Still a great song though so Im voting 5. Good job.
Thank you for the review, and i see what you mean. Next time i'll make sure to test them out and fix em before putting em up.
Plan on making a full length song out of this tho, hope it turns out well =)
((VOTED 4))
Very nice little techno/dance song you made here. Had a great beat and a really nice synth line. It was a little short though and had a very bad loop. You should at least make a smooth loop if your going to make the song short. That is the reason your not getting a 5. I still thought it was good though so Im giving you a 4.
((VOTED 5))
Ya it was pretty good when it comes to just messing around. But as a song itself, it just seamed like one big intro. I mean it still had great synth and a really nice drum beat but it lacked the fast paced action that you hear once you go into the chorus.
If I were you I would save the first 20 seconds of this song for an intro to one of your other songs. I think it would sound really good. But as the song goes, Im going to vote 5 because I still thought it was pretty cool. Good job.
Hey thx for the great review, Yeah it wasn't as strong, or emotional as my other songs but like I said, I was just kinda messing around. Yeah now that i've posted I've done some touch ups to the song but I hate resubmitting. Hopefully when I get motivated i'm going to throw up a myspace for my beats. Anywayz, ur review is very helpful and great appreciated, thx much.
ur friend,
Hellavon
((VOTED 5))
I really liked this song. You have a unique style. The synth was great. The song could have used a bit mroe drums but it was still good the way it was. I loved all the in and out affect you were doing with the synth. Made it original. Maybe it did get a little repetitve at time but still I liked it. Good job.
Thanks. I understand what you mean about the slight repetitiveness and drums. For me, the drums are always the hardest part.
((VOTED 5))
I can tell that this isnt exactly your style. Drum n bass wise, it didnt make a good song. If we are speaking just as a song in general it was pretty good. Had a really nice synth line but the drums werent the best stuff I have ever heard. I liked how they kinda seamed african.
But when your making a drum n bass song you should really focus more on making a great drums instead of great synth. Still I found myself really liking this song. Im going to vote 5. Good job.
you're reviews are extremely helpful. you're doing a great job helping the NG community thanks man.
((VOTED 5))
That definantly has to be one of the most original things I have heard on this site. It must of taken a lot of work to get the gun noises to sound good together and flow nice. When it comes to the actual song though, ignoring the fact that its made of gun noises, I thought it got pretty anoying and repetitive as the song went on. But since I know a lot of work was put into this, Im voting 5. Good job.
Hahah yeah it's really loud too, hurts my ears. I can't really listen to it for too long. Didn't take as much work as it might sound, but it did take some time to put it all together.
((VOTED 5))
This was a really great song. A nice fusion of classical and trance. They mixed greatly. The piano was definantly the best part of the song. It flowed really great with the drums and everything. This song is definantly something you should be proud of. I wouldnt change a thing. Good job.
((VOTED 4))
Well this seamed more like you were just experimenting then actually making a song. It was actually pretty okay. Lots of variety in terms of noises and instruments. And they all seamed to sync together well to make a very smooth song. Your definantly on the track to being a great artist.
The only real bad things about this were, for one, needed better quality. It seamed to get really scratchy at parts. And just to put in more stuff because for the most part this seamed pretty bland and uninteresting. Try and make the beat a little faster. Just try and be different with you song and people will definantly like it. Good job.
You're my first reviewer ever! Thank you thank you thank you! :D
I do apologize about the quality. Unfortunately I only have the converter from HamieNet to use. Thank you again for your great critiquing. The program I'm using is called JazzWare and so far I have just been experimenting. If it sounds good, I keep it. If it doesn't, I change it. If you have any sort of pointers, like software and whatnot, please feel free to PM me. Unfortunately, I can only use free programs as I'm currently very broke.
Don't worry though, I'll keep what you said in mind and try again! Thanks again for your review and ratings, you definitely made my day!
~Tara Wolfen
((VOTED 4))
It was an okay song. Really wasnt that great but it wasnt bad either. It had some really nice drums but everything else was less than good.
To make this song better, I would suggest a few thing. Increase the quality as much as you can, it was pretty scatachy which was a turn off for the song. And either make it longer or make it loop better because I song as short as this would need a loop so people could keep listening to it without a big gap of emptiness every 8 seconds.
Other than that, it was pretty good. If you really spent some more time on the song I could imagine a really nice song being made. Since I know there was definantly at least a little bit of work gone into this I am going to vote 4. Good job.
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