((VOTED 5))
A very nice song. It really kept to the beat. Nice how you got two different people to rap in one song smoothly. There were a few problems though that you could improve on though. One is that the beat was way to quiet. Another was that you were rapping to close to the mike which made it sound a little scratchy. And something I kind of noticed was how it sounded like you were both bored and not into it. Still a great song.