((VOTED 5))
That was some fucking awsome shit. The drums were great. the beat in it wasnt just the old keep a beat thing but actually really added to the song. And the guitar, now that was just gnarly. It was really low pitched which people dont usually do but you were able to do it nicely. Good job.
Thanks mate, I'll try and make it EVEN BETTER in the future :P
((VOTED 5))
It was nice. The drums were pretty standard. Not really much to them expect a simple beat but the synth really made up for it. The synth seperated it from other song. I would personally think this song would be better if it was a little more fast paced but I always say that to songs. Anyway it was a great song. Good job.
((VOTED 5))
This was an awsome song dude. The beat was great especially. I loved the synth too. It was gangsta. It had a nice mix of fast paced action and some cool slow stuff. A perfect song I would almost say. Its a shame your not submitting anymore. You really should because your great. Lets see if the submission system is better in the new layout.
((VOTED 3))
I liked the beat. Nothing else was really that good though. Try and speed things up and add some nice synth or keyboard. Then this song could be great. But seeing as this is your second song your probably still getting used to things. I know you have potential. I will keep an eye on you.
((VOTED 4))
It was pretty good. Nothing to die for. Just a standard song with a standard overused beat and some not so amazing synth. Try actually doing something different next time. Try being original. For me making the song original is much more important then a song actually sounding its best. But thats just me.
((VOTED 5))
That was really awsome. The electric guitar (or the thing that sounded like an electric guitar) was awsome and really made the song great. Gave it a type of style. That is if you can have style in a video game song remake. But the point is that it was awsome. Good job.
haha, thanks. yeah, well the guitar i used it easier to get than you think. its just a soundfont called unison (the overdrive guitar). anyway i remember you from my first song! maybe ill go back and fix it up just because you gave me a review 8P
((VOTED 3))
Ehh it was pretty basic. Mostly the same old same old stuff. Standard drums. Actually there really wasnt any drums just. Just a simple repetitive beat. You could do a lot better than that. And the keyboard needs to be better. I mean they werent bad but they were pretty boring. The most important thing to have in your songs on this site is originality and you failed at that.
Christ I did say it was experimental, It would be the base of a song.
((VOTED 5))
That was a really nice song. I didnt really think you could get an Egyptian feal in an industrial song but you sure did it pretty good. I could imagine this in an action movie or something like The Mummy. Good job.
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!
((VOTED 3))
Ehh a few simple things could have made it a lot better. First of all you MUST make the quality better if you want it to be good. I heard a lot of fuzz in this. Second of all please add some drums. Without drums a song is nothing. A non ambient song without a beat is dead before it was ever a live. And lastly, try and take the time to make it something different. Make it stand out. Do something with the melody that no ones ever done before. People may hate it or people may love it. It is a risk you have to take.
((VOTED 3))
Ehh it was okay. Kinda of slow paced and a little boring if you ask me though. Not really much to it. Not long either. But it was a loop. Try next next time making it at least do more then progressivly get lower in tune. And if you do keep it the same why do something to make the looping part really smooth to make up for it.
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