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[Sunshine Planet Tour Ep 3]

3

THE GOOD
A nice edition to the series. That looked like my backyard. lol. All happy peaceful and full of grazing animals. Some good tweening used for the clouds fish and waves. Nice job.

THE BAD
Well there could have definantly been a lot more detail in the fish and pretty much everything else. And the wave lines didnt really look like waves. Also the sun made a huge leep in size since the last movie.

FattyWhale responds:

For this one I just used the original file, so that's the small sun.

[Sunshine Planet Tour Ep 2]

3

THE GOOD
Wow. The detail on the ground was very precise and madde it look a little more professional. Also clever how the sun is starting to get smaller on every episode. And nice smooth clud movements. I see you stayed awake in science class.

THE BAD
There could have been more detail on the cluds. Also the sun was very off shaped like a ruggid oval and it just didnt look good like that. And what are those flowers doing on venus.

FattyWhale responds:

The flowers like to dance.

[Sunshine Planet Tour Ep 1]

3

THE GOOD
A very nice and creative idea. I see you went to mercury one of my personal favorites. Clever how you made the sun really big to compare how close to the sun mercury is. That shows you actually put some thought into this.

THE BAD
The sun was a little bit to big and when you tryed to put him in the corner he would bounce right back out. Also the sun was off shaped and the flowers could have moved around and animated smoother. And since the sunshine rays were the same color as the sun it would disapear whenver the ray went by.

FattyWhale responds:

Well I didn't draw the flowers so ok.

[Snakes in a Soup]

2

THE GOOD
It was pretty funny. I like snakes on a plane parodys. This one was better than a lot of the shit that has been submitted. And at least it did have some voice acting. And the incredibly bad french accent was kind of funny too.

THE BAD
I could here things in the background. It sounded liek the tv or your family or something. Also just abruptly there was no sound but the lips kept moveing. I dont know if that was just me or not.

pixelz responds:

Thanks for the cunstructive critism, I have huge trouble voice acting in the past whereas I dumped projects completely, so I'm happy with the voices here. And the sound in the back might be the ambience sound loop I got from flashkit, you know to make it seem like theres other peeps in the restaurant, and yes the lip syncing was off at quite a few points.

[Stuntman Reloaded]

1

THE GOOD
Well that car looked pretty good and there was some nicely done backgrounds. The music was very nice too. And bonus points for using the v cam semi properly.

THE BAD
This was very bad for the style you were going for. When the car hit something, instead of smashing you would just use the free transformer to make it smaller. And it definantly wasnt smooth. And when you moved the camera the fire would all of a sudden stop animating on one of the scenes. And none of the stunts were even that big. If I had some advice for you it would be to go to 30 fps instead of 12 like a noob at flash.

RuDe-BoY-69 responds:

It was 24fps.

[Guitar Master]

3

THE GOOD
There was definantly a lot of good music presented in this flash. You had system of a down in there to so that has to be some bonus points. And you did map out a teenage sticks life pretty acurately. I hope to see more from, you.

THE BAD
The sound quality could have definantly better. And I still have to point out that it was made with sticks even though you ment to. And the .gif pictures werent necesary. They looked weird along with all the solid colors.

Matakus-MkII responds:

Uh there was no system of a down, only brreaking benjamin "evil angel" at start, rob zombie "scum of the earth" at middle and dope "debbonaire" at end.

[Cool Things 333]

3

THE GOOD
It was an okay medley of animations. It was fast paced and full of action. Sometimes the pictures were so random I laughed out loud. I mean what was with those smiley face balls:) I hope to see a sequel or something from this. Also I liked the end noise from bbq at the creds.

THE BAD
It could have definantly been longer. Also that music really hurt my ears. It sounded like it was looping over itself. Also the ending was stupid and unprofessional and definantly not necesary. And I think I almost got a sezuire from this.

Carbonwater responds:

Yeah, i'll use much diffrent music if I ever make another Cool Things movie.

[13th - GOATSE]

4

THE GOOD
It was a nice flash bahmut. I like all of your flashes because you have a great style with your non clock speakonia voices and your tweened graphics. This one was a pretty good one. How can you not love a movie with a lemonparty referance.

THE BAD
Well it definantly wasnt the most graphically pleasing movie. Also the main charecters voice was much to high pitched. I had a very hard time hearing what he was saying. Its a good thing you had subtitles or I would have no idea what was going on.

kinggila responds:

"THE GOOD"

Thanks! And the answer to the last sentece, Graham cannot love a movie with a Lemonparty reference, but if it has Goatse, then he'll love it. But if it had both, then I think he'll go angry.

"THE BAD"

I didn't think of having Graham that high of a pitch voice, but quite high if I was using my voice.

Thanks for reviwing blackplastic.

[NG Assassin Ep3]

5

THE GOOD
This was one of the best movies I have seen this month. It was very funny and it moved realistlicly. Was that rotoscope? Had a great story to. I never even thought about Xing out of this one early. A great intro too. I love it when people make fun of the blam protect system. And I know if anyone should run it, it would be bitey. Great newground famouse music too. You had the super smash bros song. The elevator music song. The whole nine yards. Also you have great impressions. You sound just like jerry jackson and logo. I cant wait to see the next episode.

THE BAD
Way to anti newgrounds. Dont make fun of something I love. Also there was a lot of problems with your main charecter because of the rotoscop. He was always really bumpy and it set him apart way to much from everyone else, and he had no frickin face. Rotoscope made him look way to realistic. At some parts I had a hard time figuring out what was going on. And last of all when rotoscope man put on this solid mask but everything else was shaking and movie and it wasnt it looked very weird.

SirHappy666 responds:

One of the Best Movies this Month....

now I can die happy.

I really like the Main character, I like the way that he doesnt match the rest of the NG world.but this is the last Ng assassin I'll make, It just takes too long to animate the main character, even at 19fps it takes ages to do 10 seconds worth of movement.

Thanks for the Great review and I love the Dog with the face picture

[Oh Shit!]

3

THE GOOD
It was a pretty entertaining movie. It had great music to go with it. I love it when there is happy music in a very not happy movie. I like how everthing was kind of constantly shaking. I like that effect cause it makes it look like you work really hard. Pretty funny to. He trys to give love but he gets none back. Cant wait for number 2.

THE BAD
It was pretty short. I really liked this movie and it would be a lot better if it was a lot longer. Also the graphics could have been a lot better. There was no reall shading or anything. Just a bunch of boring old people with boring old colors. Also that shadow wasnt necesary. I think the movie would be better without it. It was to gradientish.

artville responds:

Thanks for long and great review.. Appreciating you taking the time to review :D I was kinda noobish when i made it so graphics will be better in future movies,... :D