Score: 7

"3"

submission: Sunshine Planet Tour Ep 3

date: September 1, 2006

THE GOOD
A nice edition to the series. That looked like my backyard. lol. All happy peaceful and full of grazing animals. Some good tweening used for the clouds fish and waves. Nice job.

THE BAD
Well there could have definantly been a lot more detail in the fish and pretty much everything else. And the wave lines didnt really look like waves. Also the sun made a huge leep in size since the last movie.

Score: 7

"3"

submission: Sunshine Planet Tour Ep 2

date: September 1, 2006

THE GOOD
Wow. The detail on the ground was very precise and madde it look a little more professional. Also clever how the sun is starting to get smaller on every episode. And nice smooth clud movements. I see you stayed awake in science class.

THE BAD
There could have been more detail on the cluds. Also the sun was very off shaped like a ruggid oval and it just didnt look good like that. And what are those flowers doing on venus.

Score: 7

"3"

submission: Sunshine Planet Tour Ep 1

date: September 1, 2006

THE GOOD
A very nice and creative idea. I see you went to mercury one of my personal favorites. Clever how you made the sun really big to compare how close to the sun mercury is. That shows you actually put some thought into this.

THE BAD
The sun was a little bit to big and when you tryed to put him in the corner he would bounce right back out. Also the sun was off shaped and the flowers could have moved around and animated smoother. And since the sunshine rays were the same color as the sun it would disapear whenver the ray went by.

Score: 5

"2"

submission: starwars tie killer

date: September 1, 2006

THE GOOD
It had some cool 3D graphics and some great 3D animation. Some nice star wars sound effects too. And Going through that tunnel did look pretty cool. Overall it was pretty average.

THE BAD
The graphics arent everything. The graphics were way to plain. It was like all grey and black and I didnt like that. Also whats the point of even playing the game if you get 100 health when you get the health thing. That makes no sense and pretty much ruined the hole game. Also iit was way to repetitive. No level system. I dont think so.

Score: 8

"4"

submission: Parassault

date: September 1, 2006

THE GOOD
A very nice game. A very creative idea too. I would have not thought of this. Everything moved smoothly. And the gameplay was never glitchy. I ended up pllaying it for a while. Also it was cool jumping with the boat.

THE BAD
Well it was very hard trying to move to things with awsd and the arrow ketys. I could only do one at a time. And it started to get very repetitive. You should have added different birds that give you different amount of points.

Score: 3

"1"

submission: Little Fish, Little Fish

date: September 1, 2006

THE GOOD
I guess it was kind of funny. A fish talking. Thats my lifelong dream. A I see you did use some v cam so props for that. And even thouh it wasnt the best you did have voiceacting.

THE BAD
It was super incredibly short. And in that short amount of time it didnt even have good graphics or voice acting. And I dont like ending a movie on a bright white screen with the end drawn with the paint tool with no replay button.

Score: 4

"1"

submission: Crab Beach Ball

date: September 1, 2006

THE GOOD
It was sponsered by armor games so you must have done something right. And I did like controling a little crab smashing volleyballs. It a silly yet funny idea.

THE BAD
First of all the right claw didnt work. And why would you use q and r anyway. Thats just weird. And the graphics sucked. They had no shading and they were covered with gradients.

Score: 5

"2"

submission: Snakes in a Soup

date: August 31, 2006

THE GOOD
It was pretty funny. I like snakes on a plane parodys. This one was better than a lot of the shit that has been submitted. And at least it did have some voice acting. And the incredibly bad french accent was kind of funny too.

THE BAD
I could here things in the background. It sounded liek the tv or your family or something. Also just abruptly there was no sound but the lips kept moveing. I dont know if that was just me or not.

Score: 3

"1"

submission: Stuntman Reloaded

date: August 31, 2006

THE GOOD
Well that car looked pretty good and there was some nicely done backgrounds. The music was very nice too. And bonus points for using the v cam semi properly.

THE BAD
This was very bad for the style you were going for. When the car hit something, instead of smashing you would just use the free transformer to make it smaller. And it definantly wasnt smooth. And when you moved the camera the fire would all of a sudden stop animating on one of the scenes. And none of the stunts were even that big. If I had some advice for you it would be to go to 30 fps instead of 12 like a noob at flash.

Score: 7

"3"

submission: Guitar Master

date: August 31, 2006

THE GOOD
There was definantly a lot of good music presented in this flash. You had system of a down in there to so that has to be some bonus points. And you did map out a teenage sticks life pretty acurately. I hope to see more from, you.

THE BAD
The sound quality could have definantly better. And I still have to point out that it was made with sticks even though you ment to. And the .gif pictures werent necesary. They looked weird along with all the solid colors.